Can someone translate this into spanish?

[born2drv]

WARNING!
Premises protected by cameras, closed circuit video on a remote recorder, and silent alarm.

This is what I get when I use one of those electronic translators, but is the grammar correct?

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¡ADVERTENCIA! El local protegido por cámaras, cerró circuito video en una grabadora remota, y en la alarma silenciosa.
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Thanks in advance
Yosef

 

[MmmBoost]

here ya go, only a few things i would change...

¡ADVISO! Este local esta protegido por cámaras, video de circuito cerrado con una grabadora remota, y una alarma silenciosa.

 

[born2drv]

thanks man, i appreciate it