finally finished

[blackkarma]

well ive finally finished my t-shirt design some make think its cheezy but i like it better than the last: see attached

 

[DreamerTheresa]

Do you want crits or no?

 

[blackkarma]

yeah if ya got something for me let me know im sure u've noticed the messed up frontend...but i was 2 lazy to go back over it....but let me know what u think wont hurt my feelings...bfore i went to the military i did 3d modeling/animating....painting and drawing have never been my strong points so..im all about what i can change to make it better for the next time

 

[DreamerTheresa]

The smudge tool is almost never your friend.


The shadow underneath is distracting, as well as the color/shadow/highlight/notsurewhat'sgoingon on the hood/front fender.

And "Snatch" in the writing should be either "Snatches" or "Snatched," I believe.

 

[buckshotglass]

DT- You said snatch, and snatches.

blackkarma, Your spell checker is busted, bro.

 

[blackkarma]

lol yeah actually i caught that this morning...but i decided to get rid of the whole lil blurb up top....and on the front fender i was just to lazy 2 fix didnt want to get rid of it all and start over again.....but it looks like im gonna..fix it...tho if i wanna put it a shirt

 

[CampbellsChunkySoupra]

is the car supposed to be black or blue?

 

[blackkarma]

its a flop between blue, dark blue and a bluish purple.....much like the true paint...if it was black it would be flat and disappear into the background...if u look at the darkest points they standout against the background